Are we going to read anything about a community coming together?? This is a little depressing. I think that the story
Monsters (as I'll call it for short) could have a different ending. I think that the message would be even more powerful if at the end we find out that all the power failures aren't caused by aliens but by something else, such as a meteor shower hitting many sources of electricity and wireless connections like a satellite or a power plant.
What is with the two headed new residents? They make the story have a less powerful message for me. The message could be more powerful if the community turned on itself in response to a natural force in space instead of being manipulated against each other by some other intelligent creature. Without the aliens I think that the story would be more realistic and therefore more powerful and relevant to me. As many of you know I'm not a fan of fantasy (with a few exceptions). Incorporating fantasy into the story
Monsters makes it less powerful.
Let's shift gears. What could have prevented this Maple Street community from turning on itself so far that it is destroyed? Two possibilities came to mind for me. The first came from page 89. If Don hadn't brought out the shotgun and Charlie hadn't shot and killed Pete Van Horn then there is the possibility that Pete had some information that would have calmed everyone down. Maybe he had found out that it
was aliens. What would
that news have started? Would the people of Maple Street have calmed down?
There is one more thing that I think could have saved Maple Street. If there had been three or four more Steves. Then there would have been more than one person who would have wanted to stop the destruction of the community. There would have been more pressure to put the shotgun down, not to kill Pete Van Horn, not to be so quick to blame your neighbors. This would have been a major factor in stopping the destruction of Maple Street.
One more question. What if not everyone had been killed in the mob??? Would the story
Monsters still have the same message?